You will be happy to know that I have picked up your poem titled, ‘With Great Splendor, ‘ and comprehensively line by line reviewed it on date 23 February 2019. This is posted below your poem in many comments. The complete review I am attaching here for your future reference.
Yours sincerely,
Kumarmani Mahakul
Review From the Desk of KUMARMANI MAHAKUL…………ODISHA, INDIA
Date: 23 February 2019
Name of the Poem: ‘With Great Splendor ‘- Poem by Tirupathi Chandrupatla
‘Death is truth. This comes with time and at what time death will come we do not know at all. Bit we accept this truth. We eagerly wait for God’s arrival. He gives us strength. When death comes reciting name of God we also recite name of God and we forget the pain of death and we drink the nectar given by God for salvation. We feel the moment of salvation. Attaining salvation is good for us. God does it possible and we feel his greatness. by his mercy. This poem draws attention of readers. Presenting all past to God is good for future and presenting all burdens to God we feel relaxed. Welcome gesture motivates mind to remain with God. Considering a timely invitation for pleasant proceeding of life we trust God and we accept invitation of God always as we accept invitation of death. Only God keeps us in protection and we feel this. And we hope that God will definitely keep us in protected condition at the time of death. With good feelings inside us we proceed and we proceed with trust. God has given us values and due to his gift you appear to be pleasant in personality and opportunity for growth motivates us. God provides the great company. We feel wonder regarding our life. God has given this opportunity. Getting a great opportunity we thank him ever. God’s power motivates us. Life time given by God we should utilize properly. Remaining in the company of God we get greatest splendor. Reaching up to him we get true peace and bliss. This devotional prayer poem is an outstanding poem and this is very nicely and beautifully penned. I find the true essence of this poem. This is a rarest of rare prayer poems. Thank you very much for sharing this excellent poem with us.
God has enormous power and this we feel in silence and in truth. Devotion has greatest value in this poem and we know that values motivate us to walk in righteous path. When we recite God’s name his vibrations enter within us and we feel empowered state. This brings state of awakening. At each moment we feel this truth. When strength of devotion grows much faster and we lead a life of pious nature, we also feel the state of protectiveness that God gives from inside and we thank him. God’s promise we feel and we feel his splendor. This is very true that with great splendour and light of wisdom God reaches up to us. When we are habituated reciting name of God we become fearless. The state of salvation is very well felt. Devotion and salvation both motivate each soul to achieve higher eternal goal. When we completely surrender before God we feel completely relaxed. God is greatest friend of us and we feel that when he is with us we are always safe. Soul gets a body as per his own previous actions and nature gifts him new body after death. Every law that exists here, is made by God. No rule is violated. Like birth, death is also truth. But this is truly said that life, which is combination of soul and body is an opportunity and this is very amazing. Eternally God gives us great invitation of learning his wisdom and practice values for motivating future generations. Life is full of various hopes. Our greatest hope is to get God near us at each moment. We offer prayer and motivate our lives unconditionally with deep love towards God. When God gives his touch, every hope blooms with beauty and benevolence. Tender perception allows us to stabilize mind in only God.
At each moment we feel pleasantness but timely pleasantness touched by God has greatest eternal pleasantness. Through this prayer, this truth is elaborately declared from inner core. Good feelings are generated inside mind when we have pure and positive perceptions. God deeply gives us these feelings. Purity invites his vibrations of grace to enter within. When his grace enters this creates positive devotional power within mind and our every thought is generated from righteousness. Thought becomes action. Every righteous thought helps us to lead in right path. Righteousness, devotion and trust on God help us to lead and achieve higher goals. Through spiritual perseverance we reach up to God and he reaches up to us by his own wish. God is very kind and he is our greatest Supreme Father. We have unbreakable eternal bond with him. This rarest of rare poems has exceptional and deeper philosophical theme. As per my opinion this will pour sweet nectar of devotion on every reader to it. Readers and visitors will get pleasant essence and calmness from this poem. This poem is definitely a very beneficial poem for society.’
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Openly Published on: 21 March 2019.