When you ask me to critique,

I’m happy I didn’t pass that by…Like so manyWho are afraid to cry,Trying to hold their feelings inside.I’m so glad I stumbled on my path,And asked for assistance…When things got that bad.I allowed my pride to drag me on my ass,Before I woke up to realizeThings do pass.Just like yesterdays lived,But not relived!

How successful can a creation get?If those responsible for its origin…Have been treated with neglect.Although they are mentioned,With intentional disrespect.To achieve for the thieves…A purpose only mediocrity knows.Others receive and accept,As a brilliant reflection of one’s best!And marketed with incredible deception.

Pretending that it is different…When someone else labels it grade A.And it depends who they are to get that rating high!But there’s nothing new to that mess!It’s the same redundant BS that is fed and it’s ‘dry’!No snap crackle or pop…To these nostalgic droppings!There’s nothing fresh to this mix…I’ts the same tired dressing,Composed for the…

With that which they believed,Was a life real with materialism.‘Things’ that gave them reason…To laugh at others not up to their standards.The days have come,And standards they welcomed are vanishing!Walls that protected them with deceit,Are being chipped away to display them trembling!They are frightened and exposed.There is no where for them to go!And those slandered…

Let others masquerade,With those of false charades.Those images they have adopted,Will be dropped.Leaving them to discover,Even they do not know who they are.They have lost their own identities,In pretentionsThat do not nourish, flourish or feed!If you know who it is you are…Be encouraged!You are among the few!

Eventually!A sickness to ignite a flame that rages…Soon will become uncontrollable.Leaving one who glorifies in destruction…To denounce activities,Of another…Who is as equally demented!Yet,Also given power to devour common sense.‘Spare the rod and spoil the child.’I agree!But these are privileged kids.Who have been raised to gather praise,For their craze!And we have been willing victims,Of their sins…